The dangers of my life

by xo~heartsforeva~ox   Mar 3, 2006


Sorry Sadness
Weeping pain
How did he even know my name?
How did he know that I was their waiting, hoping, wishing that he would care?
How did he know the pain I know?
How did he know the sorrow?
How did he know the pain had grew to a burden on my knee? How did he know that I was sad and never ever felt so mad?
The life I had left had been much better.. with happiness and sweetness instead of lost sorrow.
How did he know to come in time to save me from a lost long line of deadly thoughts and scars and wounds that attack me whenever they choose.
How did he know that I was here waiting for his arrival? How did he know the moment that my last breath would arrive? How did he know to pick me up so that I would survive? How did he know to save me from the dangers of my life?

Thanks so much for reading my poem! I would really love it if you would leave a comment and rate my poem so I can know what to change about my writing and what other people think!!! thanks again!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by hiding behind a smile

    I really like this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by PersiaN TeardropZ

    Its a nice poem. i reeli liked it. thnx 4 commenting on mah work btw. sure thing, u can use my poem if its gonna tell ur bf y u do it. lol. take care hun
    xoxo luv ghazal

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaimee

    I love this poem !!!! its very good keep writting!!!!!!!

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