Bhavin, this is a beautiful poem - very well written and strong with emotions.

thank you very much for looking up my work and asking me to guide you. Bhavin, I feel honoured that you asked me to do this for you.

i wish you all the very best to make your dreams come true. just keep trying, write from the very bottom of your heart and you will definitely make it to the very top.

there are some great poets on this site. check them out as often as possible because there is so much we can learn from each of them.

i also think you have a style of your own - so just let it flow and you will see that you really grow with each poem you write.

aapke compliments ke liye bahut shukrya. will keep coming back to read more of your work

good luck and peace
shobhana

Wow, another great poem that i can relate with, It is a great poem with a sad story, I feel like we both write for the same perpose and we been through similar kind of love. your poems are so great, and you are a great poet. keep it up.