by jed Mar 3, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
I remember how the smokestacks roiled |
Very Good Jed and oh so true! Great Flow Great message. Great peom. |
by shobhana kumar
Wow! this is wonderfully written. so typical of small towns struggling to rise to the megapolises. |
Really a wonderful piece. flowed well and brought home the realities of life. thanks |
This poem was interesting. Have a look at What the Rain Doesn't Wash Away. Thanks |