Lament for a dead town

by jed   Mar 3, 2006


I remember how the smokestacks roiled
A riot of noise that thumped and boiled
The sulfur smell of pulping wood
The stink of Hell yet somehow good
I thought it would be there for me
Like others on my Family Tree
My gateway to the Middle Class
Now broken steel and shattered glass
The Mill is gone, and others, too
Around which my home city grew
And the history of five generations
Becomes a wailing lamentation
For a city borne of Industry
That cannot live down on its knees
Once-proud neighborhoods in repose
Are slowly decaying into ghettos
In yards where once small gardens stood
Now grow trash and splintered wood
As its workers dissipate like dust
This town of Iron will turn to Rust

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christy Trenholm Schmall

    Very Good Jed and oh so true! Great Flow Great message. Great peom.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wow! this is wonderfully written. so typical of small towns struggling to rise to the megapolises.

    somehow, this seems symbolic of our lives too - aren't we all trying to grow, disprove and prove ourselves in someway or the other? that's what this poem brought out for me.

    well done on this one!

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Really a wonderful piece. flowed well and brought home the realities of life. thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Harley- Angel Of Despair

    This poem was interesting. Have a look at What the Rain Doesn't Wash Away. Thanks