I loved this poem.
Really and truly loved it!
The emotion was brill and the wording was just.. i don't even have words to describe it!

"If dreams were given to a lonely man
and a lonely man's dreams came true,
I'd force myself to sleep all the time
just so I could dream of you"

That stanza was my fave. It was just so sweet!
5/5
*Gem*

I love this, i've read all your poems you're really good, no matter what u say in ur biog!!! xx

Omg this is so beautiful its a really good poem 5/5

Whoa, beautifully done but somber for sure. It reminded me of Don't Wake Me by the band Skillet. This actually can probably be turned into a song the rhyming was done so well and the tune of the feelings are just so darn strong. It gave me goosebumps and a tear in my eye. Magically done.