At tHe end...~*

by The Unwritten Love   Mar 3, 2006


so sad that i loved u for years ..

i waist my time for nothing

cuz i had nothing ..

i thought it will be sweet day sweet love,, thinking of my future very hard but i was wrong

when i looked into ur eyes i feel something that i have never felt it before ...

u said that i'm ur best friend but i hoped that i was more ...

i help u but nothing at all ...

smiling everyday ,, acting like nothing is happing

smiling to the life.

but inside there is just a broken heart ....

u will not know much things about me cuz u had never loved me or i had never entered ur heart

tears r falling ,, heart is broken..life is lost
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i'll never let u see this pain that u've brought to me ,, cry on the inside pushing u away i'll never let u in i'll never fall in love again
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my lesson is one,,, a guy is never to trust
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goodbye :-( for ever

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hello... i know that it's not very good but it's just my first poem ,,,, plz vote for me so i can do better than that ..... thanx (F)

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  • 18 years ago

    by madalina

    Hey that was really good for a first poem,
    dont give up on love, its out there.
    if u need n e help just ask nd ill be happy to help u.

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥kazza♥

    You may thinkk that this isnt a good poem but it is, it has depth and emotions..

    BTW thanx for commenting on my poem

    Kazza

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosean AKA Zeni

    Your saying that it might not be a good poem, but it is and it has a very deep meaning that has been portrayed through it. kepp up the good work yh, and dont let poeple tell you that your work is not good, its always good in the hands that wrote it and the mind that conjured it.