Comments : Pain in disguise.

  • 18 years ago

    by Freakfall

    Wow this was great keep up the good work 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is brilliant, very well witten and powerfully expressive. the last stanza seems a little weaker than the rest, but overall it's a brilliant peice.

  • 17 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    OH MA FREAKING GOD AWESOME POEM I &hearts&; it good job 5/5 cynthia m.