I know the feeling. There are evn times when ive literally felt like i've ripped my heart out. Just stick with it girl..you can make it, you're awesome.
One correction:
"I know this as I crying in the rain"
either *i am..crying..or *i cry
:P
xoxo

Keep strong, and you'll break through rough times! I'm here for you if you ever need me, you can e-mail me too, it's in my profile! Great poem though, totally relate to it!

What do u mean the beach? like where?
tahts cool...if its near here mayb well c ea other and hang...yeah i hate school...um....yeah....im still on..w.ere about to sing barbie girl for hte movie...um..wb asap plz

Sad, very sad
flow was excellent
this is a 5/5