What an amazing poem... it flowed so well.. hey i understand what ur going thru... i've been thru that but u know when u love someone so much they'll always come back to u sooner or later...
excellent poem
5/5
love
amy

Thanks for the comments guys and bonnie...yeah most of the poem is about DJ..how'd ya kno? the rest is about kevin...and my other poem "feels so right" is about kevin too...he's so fu**in awesome! :D

This one was good, pretty accurate of the fate of many broken up couples, pretty sad I think. The rhymes were all good, nice flow, no mistakes

I though this was perfect! And thank you so much for comments. I loved it, Perfect 5

Yet another fantastic poem def a 5/5 keep them coming and take care hun sarah x

Wow this is so sad and I could definitely relate to it. You did a great job at letting out your emotions on this and i loved it from beginning to end. Great job on this. I loved it so much!