Dont let me go

by xXxDarkDreamerxXx   Mar 3, 2006


I see the darkness spreading
and it has no ending.
It creeps up closer to me
And I try to escape its grasp.
I scream out your name
But will you listen to my silent cry?
Will you listen to your heart?
As it senses danger?
Will you cry out of anger?
Because you dread the worse?
Please come and save me
and dont let go
Hold me tight and,
Save me from this nightmare
Dont close your eyes
Dont let me go
Come to me,
Reach out to me
I know everything looks normal
When dawn arrives.
But I call out to you
When darkness falls.
Hear my cry
Im dying and alone.
Praying that you would come
And save me from the dark.

Copyright ©2006 Desari

Pleases vote and comment i would really appreciate it ^_^

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  • 18 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    Hey this was a nice poem
    it seemed like you were rhyming alittle, but then you werent, which i like because it showed that you were more concerned about the content of the poem and getting the emotion right then trying to think of some stupid rhyme
    well done

    i would also like to thank you for your comment, not many people read my work so it was really nice to see that someone actually liked my poem

  • 18 years ago

    by mier

    This is awesome!! really great.. it really express all the hidden emotions.. great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    THIS IS AWSOME! I LOVE THIS! IT'S REALLY, Really , really, really really, really, really, (get the point? lol) GOOD! KEEP UP THE AWSOME JOB! 5/5

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