Hi
amazing poem
i hope your love may stay strong for each other
the two of u are parting....i can (perhaps very unfortunately) understand your pain perfectly. cos this girl i like...whom i havnt been able to talk to after lotsa shit tht happened between us...is going to another town soon....after the school farewell party. please tell me if i shud get all my guts to gether and give it a shot n try n talk to her
or shud i just not...because it wud hurt like someones stabbing me.
please leave a comment and tell me wat u think i shud do.
thanks so much
keep writing ^_^
Dhaval

MAGNIFICENT...this poem can be lyrical if you didnt notice it...but you can really sing that..that poem was very lyrical.you should try to sing to it...Excellent job
5/5
~TPOMH~