I Can Feel You

by myshiningstar14   Mar 3, 2006


Even though you're
miles apart I can feel
your heartbeat getting
faster and faster.

Even though you're
not here phyisically, I
can feel you screaming
and crying, as the tears
sting your face.

Even though you're
not really here, I feel
your arms around my
waist, saying: "It's
going to be ok babes.
We're going to be ok."

Even though you're
there, and I'm here, I
know it hurts because
I feel it too, I can feel
you.

Even though you're
not really here, I feel
you and I just want
you to know that you
are with me always.

Even though you're
not here, I see the
sad look on your
face, whenever I
dream about you,
now.

Even though you're
there, and I'm here,
i know it hurts because
I feel it too, I can feel
you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Xx_juss_cant_help_miiself_xX

    Okay this is one of my faves cuz i recently(about a week ago) got out of a relationship of 2 months with a guy named evan and he lived 2 hrs away. i can feel this poem so much! well i loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Excellent Job..and i love the fact you used that way of sayin..your there and im here...Great job
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Sigh ok wel i tried..those are jus my feelings i actually rly like this poem but we...sigh better luck next time i guess.

    LIS

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    This didnt really feel like a poemm. i know there was a lot of emotion in it because i can tell by the words but i didnt feel the words. i liked the message of always being there no matter what though. good job.

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