This didnt really feel like a poemm. i know there was a lot of emotion in it because i can tell by the words but i didnt feel the words. i liked the message of always being there no matter what though. good job.

Sigh ok wel i tried..those are jus my feelings i actually rly like this poem but we...sigh better luck next time i guess.

LIS

Excellent Job..and i love the fact you used that way of sayin..your there and im here...Great job
5/5
~TPOMH~

Okay this is one of my faves cuz i recently(about a week ago) got out of a relationship of 2 months with a guy named evan and he lived 2 hrs away. i can feel this poem so much! well i loved it!