Feel This..

by Luke   Mar 3, 2006


Feel my pain..
See my tears..
Have my Life..
For 14 years..

It's not easy..
It's soo hard..
Always defensive..
Always on guard.

Don't just love me..
Free my soul..
Fill this huge..
Gaping hole!

Blood for tears..
Black for blood..
Feeling low down..
Feeling like mud.

When will it end.
When will it stop..
When will i..
Just die and drop?

© of Luke/Tuffguypr 3rd March 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    Great poem Luke! Every poem is better than the last and each is so heartfelt and beautiful! Awesome poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Loves Him

    Amazing poem. I really like it.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This poems was great! I loved it! It's so simple but it have so much emotion in it which I love! Keep up the good work! 5/5

    -Steph-

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