When I'm Near Her

by Harley- Angel Of Despair   Mar 3, 2006


I once walked among the lost
With a black heart as cold as frost
Than in the mist I saw her
with her golden hair like fine fur
Her smile set free my torn soul
She filled me up and made me whole.
Her wan skin sparkles and glistens
It calls to me but I should not listen
Her eyes sets fire to my mind
it gives me something hard to find
Tears of pain fall on her cheek
I swear curses no one should speak
I would fall on my sword to relieve her pain
Her kindness and loveliness are my bane.
I need her and see needs me
together we are free
from the hate, from the sorrow
For the high and from the low
I see her smile is peaceful it lets me rest
I need no other, I've met the best

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kally

    I like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    I know exactly how u feel gud one

  • 18 years ago

    by Kally

    Thanks for the comment and I really enjoyed reading this one..You have talent

  • 18 years ago

    by The Unknown

    Hi, harely, thanks for your 5, i have read 5 poems of you i only like this one and i gave you 5 for, you can write very good, as far as i can see, please put always in mind, we are not the only people on this site, what i want say that people doesn't have the time to read all, that is why i do advice you, make your peom very short as it can, if you can see, you will find that you got the best for your short peoms and not or nothing for the long one, second, please put in mind that english is not the mother langues of all the people. once again thanks for your 5

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Beautifully written. i l0ved it. great ch0ice 0f w0rds t0o. thank u f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em! meant al0t

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

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