Great poem.. that's how i feel a lot. always trying to be there for everyone, and be happy.. but then when you need them they don't notice. well 5/5 good job

I thought this was excellent.. i know excatly how u feel.. im like that.. i dont usually worry abt me i just want my baby and my friends happy.. but then there is a certain extent where i dont want to b completely MISERABLE... good job with this!!! & thanks for commenting my poem!!

Sorry girl, I miss u 2...I will always remember u, will not forget u, well...I know it's been awhile since we talk, but u could come 2 me if u need anything k? I'm always here 4 u, u noe that, luv ya...

Nice poem i really liked the idea of how she wants to be this incredible friend to someone when she isnt even trying to help herself very diffrent

Hey, gr8 poem...! (first 4 lines taken from beautiffuly broken? lol i was just reading her quotes then read ur poem....)

That was an awesome poem! I honestly have no idea what to say.

Great job!

Which lines were taken?

That was perfect poem i really love it and thankx for being there for everyone u love Joc...and oh i really missed talkin to you anyways take care...your frined Jammal--

remember love is strong then hate!

Hi...i think this is your first i've leave any comments to...and this one was really very beautiful poem and i loved it...peace out

Yea, no wonder it seems familiar, lol, still, it's a great piece, I wanted 2 be remembered that way 2...hope u haven't 4gotten me, coz i didn't..juz been bz...lol...hee..tc...

Wow...that's nice....like the flow and the whole feeling of it was amazing...nice writing.

Wow so tru lol

There is a saying that says " write your name with love and kindness on the hearts around you and you will never be forgotten. I think people will remember you and your words. keep up the good writes. peace kid

I loved this it was really great! I loved your choice of words and it flowed very nicely!((5))

Exactly how i would want to be remembered. I love this it;s quite a simple poem but very meaningful great job.

I no what your on about from the first few lines it is one of my favorite famous poems and i loved the idea of expanding on it :) however its kinda wordy and i don't liuke the six foot under bit. it hasn't7 got the woooooooowwwww factor.

amy

I love love love this poem...great job...5/5