God this sounds familiar! lol shame that alot of people feel this way 5/5 xxx

I loved it! i felt it was good until i got to the last stanza, well, actually its more like the last line. once i read that it suddenly became great. its something i think many if not all of us think at some point in our lives, if not all the time. good...sorry, great poem. i also liked the on going theme in this piece. trying to be perfect, trying to be someone your not. this is another extremly commom feeling i believe. but please don't get me wrong, i don't pretend to be wise or even well expirienced, i'm just simply expressing my thoughts and feelings. well done

Brad

P.S. thanks for voting and commenting on my poem 'Never Enough'. it was much appricaited, as all comments, good or bad, are.