by kayla Mar 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
My love is true for you |
by aaron c s
In my opinion, which you can take as constructive crtiticism or not, is that there wasnt any emotion in it. u tried to hard to rhyme and there was no flow and the rhyme scheme was different in each stanza which makes it a exausting read. good start though. it definately has potential. |