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by Poetvoices Mar 4, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Sailor Jon is excited, but he's worried about his darling wife. He doesn't know that Belle's not strong enough. She's decided to end her life. "I'm almost home! She'll be so glad," he says aloud, and he hopes so bad. "I hope she's home. I can't wait ONE second more! I need to tell her, we're no longer poor!" He casts his net one last time. Over the starboard side it soars. This is Jon's way of completing the last of his sailors' chores. "What is that thing?" he wonders as he draws his net back to. The body of a lady. Her skin is pale and blue. A tear rolls down his cheek as he salutes his Belle. The one he knew to do want she wanted so well.
by Cody
How sad but beautfuly writen now I will go read the final piece
by Ruthie
What r u doing to me 2day! the second poem that's made me cry! so well structured so well written and so sad! keep it up huny keep it up! *hugs* luv ya Ruthie
