Comments : You were right about one thing

  • 18 years ago

    by silence kills

    Nice poem.. i hate it when they lie, i prefer being hurt by the truth too.

  • 18 years ago

    by lianna

    AHA SANDRO?
    LOL
    LOVE YOU! AND UR WRITING
    JEZZZZ:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sharon

    It's a good poem but you might be trying to make it rhyme too hard, just let it come to you