by WriterX Mar 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Cry over your loss |
Hey its me elli- you have a great poem here! will you read beathless by sarah |
Great poem. Short but to the point. Keep up the good work, 5/5 |
Short yet to the point. Excellent for that. Some choice words that added to this piece. Really thought that it had this cool way about it. Short lines that heightened the delivery. |
by xMODEL
Awwe, this is a really good poem. KEEEEEP ON WRITING! I'd love to hear more from you. 5/5 |
by PURE HEART
Again awesome work........ |