My Better Half

by myshiningstar14   Mar 4, 2006


Among my tears and
our pain, you're the
stronger one. you're
my better half.

You're my better
half, oh how you
make me laugh.

Among my
numbness and our
strengthened love,
you're always there
and with one word,
you know whats going
on inside me. you're
my better half.

You're my better
half, you do the
math.

Among everyone
you're the only one
who lets me cry and
who seems to really
understand. Thats
why you're my better
half.

You're my better
half, oh how you
make me laugh.

Among my loss
for words, our love
grows and I'm
breathn' deeper
than ever before.
you're my better
half.

You're my better
half, now you
do the math.

**ok so my last poem like this called, i can feel you..sumone rly didnt like bc it wasnt a "poem" well let me tell you all sumthn a poem reflects feelings which is the most important aspect...opening of the heart. So yea this is a poem and so is, I can feel you..pelase read and enjoy. LOVE YOU!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Patricia

    Hey that was a very nice poem i loved it you should check out mine i just registered so there's not very much!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by xღxBeckyxღx

    Hey, thanks for commenting on my work :) and you're right..when i first met my boyfriend my mind told me he's the one!
    I love this poem its so cute! :) 5/5 :) xx

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hey
    THANK U SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING ON ALL OF MY POEMS!!!
    i love you!!! lol
    amazing poem this one....you really let it slide in with the 'better half'...and i like the you do the math part too... :)

    im gonna comment on a LOT MORE poems...but can u give me some time? im in the middle of exams...so i sleep only for 3 hours lol...but i promise i'll find time soon...

    thank u...and keep writing...
    and oh i also read that other one wich someone didnt like.... WELL...if that person cant feel it...he doesnt have a heart.....cos i sure did!!!

    Dhaval.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    This poem was awesome and all the last ones rhymed...that was very very well written.Excellent job hun
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

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