This poem was awesome and all the last ones rhymed...that was very very well written.Excellent job hun
5/5
~TPOMH~

Hey
THANK U SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING ON ALL OF MY POEMS!!!
i love you!!! lol
amazing poem this one....you really let it slide in with the 'better half'...and i like the you do the math part too... :)

im gonna comment on a LOT MORE poems...but can u give me some time? im in the middle of exams...so i sleep only for 3 hours lol...but i promise i'll find time soon...

thank u...and keep writing...
and oh i also read that other one wich someone didnt like.... WELL...if that person cant feel it...he doesnt have a heart.....cos i sure did!!!

Dhaval.

Hey, thanks for commenting on my work :) and you're right..when i first met my boyfriend my mind told me he's the one!
I love this poem its so cute! :) 5/5 :) xx

Hey that was a very nice poem i loved it you should check out mine i just registered so there's not very much!!!!