The kiss

by Hurtingsoul   Mar 4, 2006


A bit long ...sorry....

Eyes locked, faces stern, to much for me
i got to break free from this intensity
cant move, stale to the bone
"let me go" i say in a husky tone

He doesn't move, he doesn't listen
his eyes only shine and glisten
instead of leaving i grip his body, hold him close
this is like a drug, got to take another dose

Closer we get centimeters away
my hate for him, i betray
i know he sees mystery in my eyes
because hes trying to break me inside

My hands travel up his spine
he stays still and the feeling he gets is divine
his hands grasp my hips and holds on tight
he doesn't want to end this feeling tonight

Finally he kisses me and i melt
the kiss was breathtaking something i never felt
i kiss him back with all the passion i contain
and not once does he refrain

I push my tongue in his mouth, so sweet
delicious he tastes like a treat
infatuation swirls in our mouths inside
its like a strawberry slip and slide

We break apart, air we need
as we take big breaths desperately
then back i claim his mouth as mine
and again our tongues entwine

After we pull away from each other
an lock eyes with one another

This kiss ill never forget
Nor the way our tongues first met..

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this was a dream i had ..weird
I hope you guys like it plz comment and rate

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  • 16 years ago

    by kimberley

    I really like that so very much

  • 17 years ago

    by gack60

    A really nice piece, the description of a kiss; that makes a nice poem, i loved the detail used and the similies you used to compare the feelings.

    I noticed a couple of small spelling mistakes which are easily corrected.

    Overall a nice piece worthy of a 5/5

    Well done

    Gary.

  • Really nice poem. I like how you described the kiss into bits of details. Great job.

    5/5

    Keep writing!!!

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • Really nice poem. I like how you described the kiss into bits of details. Great job.

    5/5

    Keep writing!!!

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was a dream? I bet you woke up with a smile on your face :]
    I loved the images your created, they were truly beautiful. Well done *5/5*