That poem is not really long dont worry
Great job....l
i love your rhyme
i love your flow
i love your detail
All around amazing job
Excellent
5/5
~TPOMH~

Wow. loved the poem. i still rember my first kiss and it was a lot like that but then nothing gd ever lasts does it? erm ignore me. the rhyming scheme was great and it flowed really well and wasn't just norm words but quite descriotive. anyway great poem that i looooooooooooooooved. 5/5. take care oh and remember dreams are a reflection of wt ur subconsioness is feeling so maybe u an this guy have a ....connnection!!!!? lol. well great poem anway

Hey no probs bout making u realise, hope i helped, one thing i cant resist saying u had any dreams bout this or that latly? im sorry i was ment to make it sound annpyingf but it came out wrong. neway write more soon, lots of love
girl with no bloody name

I had a dream like that once haha great poem though!

Wow odd i had a dream like that
except it sounded like you didnt know who he was i knew who she was it was you

i love you im sorry i know you wanna be friends i cant stop the feeling i cant live again with out u
p.s. changing name to fallen

That was bout us lol jk neva got there
luv ya

This was a dream? I bet you woke up with a smile on your face :]
I loved the images your created, they were truly beautiful. Well done *5/5*

Really nice poem. I like how you described the kiss into bits of details. Great job.

5/5

Keep writing!!!

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Really nice poem. I like how you described the kiss into bits of details. Great job.

5/5

Keep writing!!!

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

A really nice piece, the description of a kiss; that makes a nice poem, i loved the detail used and the similies you used to compare the feelings.

I noticed a couple of small spelling mistakes which are easily corrected.

Overall a nice piece worthy of a 5/5

Well done

Gary.

I really like that so very much