Losing This Fight

by Lauren   Mar 4, 2006


And i know this is something that i have to do,
i have to get over you.
but i`m losing this fight,
and the pain ends tonight.

but before i go,
i just want you to know.
that i loved you
with everything i ever had.
and i know i was the reason for our break up,
and i know i messed things up...
but i just want one more chance,
and you won`t give that to me.
i don`t want to hurt anymore.

so,
the story of
my tragic love life
ends in death.
(( i love you ))

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kirstie

    I love your poems lauren! i love how you write so well. i can never seem to get down what im thinking and feeling and still make sense! LOL. i think it helps to read poems from this site and know that your not alone, others have gone through the same thing and are surviving. this is a really good poem, as are the rest of yours =)
    your amazingly gifted

  • 18 years ago

    by Colin Chau

    Beautiful work lauren.

    Keep it up.

    Colin

  • 18 years ago

    by LOST iN LOVE

    Aww this is sad..i really like it though..i think i like it so much because i also can relate to this in a way..im adding you to my favorites!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Your poem rox
    its really nice and tender~!!
    you're a young talented poetess so plz keep it up
    Much luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    A really deep poem you express yourself well.

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