It sounds sweet...
too bad it's not done yet... :)

"being joy" isn't quite correct... maybe "filled with joy"?

"When your down, I'm down because your always happy"

- i don't quite understand this last line... the part after "because", at least... do you mean she's always happy, so when she feels down, you do as well?

- would like to know when it's finished... :)
tell me something when you finish it, please...

*isabel*