by katie! Mar 4, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Mist of Demonic Death |
I loved how you told a story with this poem, that is actually hard to do. The flow was pretty constant and the diction was well chosen. My only complaint would be that some of the rhyming seemed a bit forced. Still, well written, nice job you two! |
You too are amazing poets |
by Biscuit
An original idea though it doesnt flow a well as it could, thr seem to be too many words in some of the lines, great imagery though xx |
Brillaint peice, flows well thoughout and the content is fantastic |
by Luke
You did it! |