Katie, it was an honor and priviledge writing this with you. This is the first collaboration I have done and you made it a blast. Thank you for sharing your skills and ability with me.

You did it!
Well done it's great!
Amaizing infact lol.. Hope mine and angelas can be as good.

Well done guys.
:D

Brillaint peice, flows well thoughout and the content is fantastic

5/5

An original idea though it doesnt flow a well as it could, thr seem to be too many words in some of the lines, great imagery though xx

You too are amazing poets

I loved how you told a story with this poem, that is actually hard to do. The flow was pretty constant and the diction was well chosen. My only complaint would be that some of the rhyming seemed a bit forced. Still, well written, nice job you two!

-Ellie