That was really amazing, although it was depressing.. I have been in that charactors shoes before several times.. where every one is bothering you and you would do any thing in your power just to get away.. Although i have never made it to suicide.. or any thing close to that.. Great Job, you have alot of potential! - Can't wait to read more!

Ey i no what your feeling cos ive been there i hvent liked tried suiside or anything but its a good poems well done!!

Wow, thats deep...i love it