Goodbye

by CritiX   Mar 4, 2006


I cant do it anymore
Pretending to still care
Leaving every day for school
Thinking what I should wear

I cant even rhyme anymore
Making the poem read nice

I really cant do it anymore
I really cant..

Actually this will be my last text here.. Not that anyone ever read one of mine.
I have the twisted mind, the sick thoughts, and the scars to back it up.

One of these days, Im going to jump in front of a train. When people will hear about it I will know exactly what they will think. Him? He was always fine right? And then a week from that nobody will care, people care so little about it all. I can just drop down on the floor and cry..

..if I really cared.

I hope u all have a nice life..

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  • 18 years ago

    by CritiX

    Thanks all for at least reading my poems and in some cases thanks for commenting..

    This is and will be my last poem here on Poems-and-Quotes. In a few days from now I will kill myself leaving this pathetic world.. Thanks for those that stood by me.. Cya in another lifetime maybe

  • 18 years ago

    by CritiX

    Thanks for rating my poems though =) The reason that people don't see this side of me, is because the people around me dont know I'm depressed alot and dont know I write like this. I'm dutch so that would explain the (sometimes) bad grammer =) ...

    Someone liking my poems like you, bring a little hope back.. because I really lost it all.

  • 18 years ago

    by CritiX

    Actually.. this wasnt really a poem. At least I didnt want it to be.. I was planning on killing myself one of these days..

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    I too believe it is a good poem. They dont always have to rhyme. Sure it can help but other than a little boost it doesn't affect the outcome. Congratulations. Gonna look at your other stuff =D.

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