I too believe it is a good poem. They dont always have to rhyme. Sure it can help but other than a little boost it doesn't affect the outcome. Congratulations. Gonna look at your other stuff =D.

Actually.. this wasnt really a poem. At least I didnt want it to be.. I was planning on killing myself one of these days..

Thanks for rating my poems though =) The reason that people don't see this side of me, is because the people around me dont know I'm depressed alot and dont know I write like this. I'm dutch so that would explain the (sometimes) bad grammer =) ...

Someone liking my poems like you, bring a little hope back.. because I really lost it all.

Thanks all for at least reading my poems and in some cases thanks for commenting..

This is and will be my last poem here on Poems-and-Quotes. In a few days from now I will kill myself leaving this pathetic world.. Thanks for those that stood by me.. Cya in another lifetime maybe