Guilt Trip

by Darien   Mar 5, 2006


Guilt Trip

The cat got his tongue again,
now he swallows his pride.
Fess up to all your lies,
guilt trips are one way.

This record keeps skipping,
all I hear is the same thing.
Someone change this track,
I'm sick of hearing lies.

He's creating another monster,
full of hope and expectations.
He will destroy it with words,
so fake and so soothing.

He will never rise to stand,
weakened from his own mind.
Controlling thoughts impure,
hate breeds and grows so well.

He messed up his life again,
with regrettable mistakes.
What was he thinking then?
Just move on one more time.

It's not too late to change,
the way you have become.
There are people who will help,
they will take you back home.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    How can this not have more comments!!!
    Like all your poems, it's fab!
    (I'm so running out of adjectives to describe your poems, lol)
    I love the message in it.
    5/5 as always
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    I liked this poem because of the last stanza
    it is so hopeful and positive

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    It's not too late to change,
    the way you have become.
    There are people who will help,
    they will take you back home.
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    Great way to end the poem. Loved it again. All your poems are really good, Tehe. Keep writing, And thanks again for the comments =] 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Wonderfully written my friend! You've created a piece with such meaning. Great stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    Great write Darien! I love your poetry so much! You can feel the regret, wonderful job!

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