by Darien Mar 5, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Spring |
by Shawna
I loved this poem as well!! I love nature and animals!! I loved how you described everything!! I could imagine the bears coming out of their dens after a long winters hibernation!! Great job! 5/5 |
by Chris
I like the stanza |
by Nelle
Awww, Darien i loved this..You really showed what spring is all about...well in your country..here in florida, its NOTHING like that at all lol but it sounds amazing!! great great job |
Very interesting. Due to the unrhymingness, the end of each stanza seemed very abrupt. Not that I'm one to talk, I rarely-if-ever rhyme. I just found it interesting. It fits the topic well, though, Spring is a very harsh season, in a way. The imagery is great, word choices very good. :) |
by Little Dot
Good job on this poem. It had good imagery and I can't stand winter, so that made the poem even better. |