A wonderful poem here. You've really brought out the raw emotion. I like how you focused on one topic and layered at brought out all your feelings about it. Well Done
Sondos

Cool poem. reminds me of some one, it's so emotional.

~*~cindy~*~

Wow this poem is great, i can really relate, i think a lot of people have gone through this and can say they know what your saying, it's touching, i like it alot, 5/5 good job

Good job. i really get it....to have the person youre closest to just leave. the pain does end though right...