The Blinding Light

by Darien   Mar 5, 2006


The Blinding Light

These white lights are blinding,
but I can't see anything black.
The blind are left in darkness,
but why can't I see anything?

Disillusioned and hysterical,
why am I going insane?
Look at me I'm talking,
but I'm the only one replying.

These voices in my head,
are not human-like.
Thoughts of a better life,
Seem so far from here.

Walls all around me,
in a room that is small.
A fate I did not see,
and I fail to believe in.

Sadness for the pathetic,
pity for the weak and cynial,
Discovering who we are,
can be the end we await.

Cry my eyes out in regret,
slowly but surely I'm leaving.
If this bright light will save me,
Then I will walk towards it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Awwwww...This Was Really Good :D...It Was Really Good...I Bet A Lot Of People Can Relate To This :D Your Poetry Is Amazing.. ;D 5/5
    Love,
    Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I'm lost for words. My mouth literally dropped. Theres nothing bad I can say about this poem, Thought it was great from start to finish! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I liked how this was written freely without conforming to a rhyming scheme or structure. The simple language you use, makes what you write seem more real and effective. I also liked how it had a postive ending to it, and how you seemed to have some salvation despite all the sadness. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good work, I'm sure many people can relate to this poem and the feeling you seem to be going through in it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Man... I'm astounded... You wrote so many amazing pieces on this day... This one is no exception. Top writing my friend!!

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