I really liked it. It just goes to show...there really is such a thing as love at first sight.

I really like this poem...it started out choppy though but then it got alot better
5/5

WOW.... this is really lovely. turns brilliantly in the end

purva

Another truely amazing poem!! 5/5
and thank you for sticking up for me, i read the comments you left on emile's poem and it means alot. it seems like the only people here for me are the ones i dont really know that well, thank you sooo much though. it means a great deal!!

Lovely words! They sail smoothly over the soul as a ship on the sea. Beautiful!

This poem is soooo beautifull.. The words fly by so smooth.. It makes me think about every girlfriend I ever had.

I LOVED it! it makes me think about my ex bf! *slaps face* i shouldnt tho! cheack out mine sometime!!

This was really a sweet poem. I love a guy that can express himself like you.
your a real inspiration. luv ya

I love it. Love at first site... Comment Mine : )

Love at first sight, love the poem cuz it's so simple yet so sweet. thank's for commenting on my poem it's very appreciated lol u're the first person to comment on my poems since i deleted all of my stuff :D

pili.

Thats amazing how everything is so amazingly worded..I love your writing

That was one of the best poems i have read from a guy! awesome work!

I adore the ending...I thought it was really cute.
I liked the imagery you portrayed in this, it created vivid pictures, flow was spot on throughout and the poem made me smile, it was a joy to read.

This is really a nice piece of art, it's very lovely and in the ending to sums up all the impressions. . very cutely(does this word exist? ) written. . ^^

5/5