Once Again

by BloodScars   Mar 5, 2006


Chocolate eyes
Meet the truth
The sapphires cries
Shed the regret
Shadow passes
Lights go out
Undress the truth
Holding on
Naive and weak
A sense of relief
Hold my body
Find yourself
Seeking truth
Discovering itself
More than ever
Love before
Scream in torture
Scream in pain
Love myself
Ounce of relief
Through the vein
Feel the heartbeat
Feel the grace
Together be one
Hold the end
In little disgrace
Hearts unbroken
Mended as one
through the confer
We have won

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  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    Took me like 8 tries to find the right...flow i guess you would call it? lol, but it's a really good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Great write! It took me several times to finally get the right flow out of the poem. My suggestion is to add some punctuations to help the reader to understand it easier... but of course... that's only me. Great write though! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Love it! Great job 5/5

    - natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    WOW. That was really good. I don't normally read or write love poetry but that really snagged my attention. I was just kinda perusing and decided to check this out. Glad i did, congrats on the amazing poem.

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