Crytalised Soul

by Kenshin   Mar 5, 2006


She cries everyday,
Making sure no one sees her,
People says it's all a cry for attention,
None know the truth about her.

Misunderstood as usual,
Why can't they see the truth?
Why can't she be herself?
Only for a day, take care of herself.

She listens to my problems,
And listen to everyone elseâ??s,
Making sure they smile,
Even if it' on her expense

Yet, she lives each day,
Making sure nothing goes wrong,
Making sure everyone is smiling,
Yet within, she carries a burden so hard,

I try my best to let her to let go,
Of a personality she really is,
The kindness in her heart,
Something everyone takes advantage of.

Trying her very best,
To just be herself,
Crying each day,
I stand by and watch,

Dear god,
Please here my prayer,
Let this crystalized soul find peace,
And be herself one more time.

Let no one take advantage of her,
Or hurt her every again,
And let me find the strength,
To be there by her side, till death to us apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nic

    Wow

  • 18 years ago

    by Timeless Hopeful

    This is a good poem about a girl crying when no one is looking. Truly you captured sadness in this poem.

    Your title is wrong it should be:
    Crystallised Soul

    Good poem Kenshin.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nada & Kris

    I know the truth, but truth be told there is a difference between crying for attention and adapting to ones need. for we all are humans and we all need our own species to be with. Arigato on this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great poem. With emotion and all. Great write and keep on writing.

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