That really is a sad poem. And i love it, i think it is brilliantly written. You're good and writing poetry. Good job.

Don't know why, but this poem made me think about LA song...I love that song!!! I really do hope that you are okay and that you won't leave home, cause people do love you no matter what...You know I am here for you hunn, always!!!

Much Love Sabrina

Hey darl l0t 0f em0ti0n in thi p0em. very t0uching stay str0ng

Amanda
So sad sweetie....full of heartfelt emotion.....If you were near me, it would be a pleasure to have you around....I'm sorry I haven't commented in a while...been sick with a cold, I'm better but still not up to par. Take care, Love ya, Ann

Lovely poetry :) Running away from your troubles will never help . . I hope you're ok xXx. Keep writing - I love these deep poems you write :)

Peace. [Sole]

Very nice poem....i felt that way once....and i ran away from home...not a good idea trust me!...lol...but yeah it was very nice....sad...but very good! i will give it a 5/5!
~*Linz*~

Amanda, you’re heading out of town just because you ruin
Everything!! Cmon, you’re not telling me that I should head
Out of town too along with many others because we all ruin
Things sometimes. We are all humans. We make mistakes
And ruin things once in a while cuz that’s the way we are.
It’s all your choice anyway. But think of the little good things
You have done for others. Don’t be focused on just the
Troubles you make. You’re a human. And we are born
To help each other. So, just have your goal and purpose
In life in front of your eyes and go on.
nothing can stop you when you always keep your purpose in your mind.
much love,
marjan

Such a sad poem. So deep...I love the way you manage to put so much emotion into every line. A short, sharp one this time and I think the snappy language gives it a real punch. I really love your style! You're definately in my favs now! 5/5 x