by Iyla
I miss you sweetie, great write! i hope everything is going well for you. and you better win.. :) |
by Iyla
I miss you too doll. and im still prayin |
by Fig
This is an amazing poem! the flow is soo fast and works brilliantly with the short lines, enjambement (sentenses flowing onto the next line) and the rhyming couplets. thers soo much emotion and power in this poem its truely amazing. one of the best ive ever read on this site., |