by Luke Mar 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
So many mates.. |
This is really really good.....we do hav ethe same writing ...its great |
by Darien
Hmm, the use of the ... is the only thing throwing me off. I mean, I use it when I'm writing a message, but it doesn't work in poetry. But the message in this poem is good. |
Hey luke how are you? one agen another good poem!! check out mine sometime n comment please thx love ya xoxo |