Comments : I write this...

  • 18 years ago

    by Meme

    Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice ;)
    keep it up .!!!

    >>-(¯`· gIrL ·´¯)->>

  • 18 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    This poem is so beautiful! i love the lines
    I write this almost as if childish
    Overcome by my youth
    very good choice of words and well spoken. also the finishing verse was brilliant! great job:) keep it up and by the way, nice touch with the 4 my pretty green eyes! lol awesome:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Anton

    Well done greate poem!