Comments : I'll Be Your Slave

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Unique & amazing !! 5/5
    love amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    Very orginal and unique! I really enjoyed this poem, you have a lot of talent and potential! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Yes this is unique... And superb at the same time! Great writing, loved this piece!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    You are the teacher, and I am your pupil. Teach me all you think I should know. Amazing!! Truly, truly amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    Awesome...total hotness right there. this poem rocks and it truely shows your potential in writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very unique and well written peice.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    An excellent piece of poetry - I can really relate to it. I love your work :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I think out of my top three favorite poets on thtis sight, you're probably number 2 on the list. I love your imagery so much and the use of words.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wonderfully written! great, great work as always!

    love and luck
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Very nicely written. I like it a lot.

    Love,
    Line

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I love it! I am a HUGE fan of dark poems, and this one is amazing I really love it. Great job.