I am.. (Rictameter)

by katie!   Mar 5, 2006


I am
A little piece
Of mental health's new game
I am nothing but a liar
For I fight the wind and the elements
To succumb to my whole desire
To protect myself from hate
Sadness, madness.
I am

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    WOW Katie..... a beautiful rictameter! Filled with emotion, very powerful..... it flows well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    How's this for honesty? Absolutely brilliant!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Fleckney

    Very powerfull and extremely well written I so admire anyone who has the discipline to write stuctured poetry, I myself just jumble it all on the page and let the reader sort it out lol
    Wonderfull job.
    Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Yes it is very powerful and tremendously sad! Wonderfully written rictameter!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very powerful and sad! Beautiful rictameter!

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