EXCELLENT JOB..and very good that your goin to be okay..it is a sad tragedy..i just recently went through break up myself..it hurts yes but im glad that your over it now..im not over mine..but me and my gf were together for 9 months
Awesome Job..my suggestion.Your Flowness..make your words flow a little more..it seems rather choppy
but still an amazing job
5/5
~TPOMH~
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Torn Pieces of mY Heart
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ttyl

I know exactly how you feel or felt. I went out with this guy he was the first kiss. When i found out that he was planning to break up with me and go out with my friend I flipped and broke up with him and then he went out with her. To this day he still wants to be friends but I want absolutely nothing to do with him. I'm glad you're feeling better ^^ keep up the good work...5/5

I know how ya felt see i me and my boyfriend were togethor for 2 yrs but he had this thing were he flirts behind mt back and this one girl hes known pretty much since he moved down here and me and her became friends and he iked her and kept tellin her tht if she wnt out wit him he'd break up wit me but tht crushed me omd tht rlly hurt but luckly me and him worked evreything out and we jus celebrated our 3 yr annaversery but i love your poem keep writing