Down With Humanity
by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Mar 5, 2006
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18 years ago
This could be one blazing head banger if put to blairing guitar solo's and blasting double bass beats. it's so long though..... couldnt you ever be satisfied with just a five stanza poem for once? jesus!
so.... i'll give you a 4.5 because of the exessive longness, but since there is no 4.5 option they give us, i'll give you a five in thier terms but a 4.5 in my heart.
and p.s. i want to see you write about some kind of love you have in you, i know it's in there, your not cold through and through. maybe even a want or a desire you have. that would be a very special thing to read. you know, i wont consider you any weaker for writing on those subjects of less abrasive terms, i would hold you, infact, in a place of respect in my view.
so write on truth, and write for the sake of what you want, and what you have already..... desire's and love!
peace,
phil.
