This is REALLY good you are a very good writer!!

You have a gift and never let people tell you that you don't because as I read through your poems..I feel what your feeling and thats something that a good poet can make happen...so keep it up!

Brilliant peice, well written with a lot of feeling and a great message

JL again you suprise me, it's so beatifull, it's inspiring.. take care hun..
*hugs* p.C
p.s. thanks for helping me out with the poem xox