Life

by Cantchangeme   Jan 21, 2004


A very old man woke up
Breathing heavily he opened the door
And looked to the sky and smiled
Then he died

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  • 19 years ago

    by Hannah Leigh Pate

    That poor old man, life does suck. Good poem!

  • 20 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    i think this poem really signifies the fact that death isnt a bad thing, and that when we die, we should just hope we die in peace.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I don't even feel sad when I read this poem. It seems to me that all we can ask for when it comes to life and death is that we are as happy as can be, and that when we die, we die with a smile. I think the shortness of this poem is testimony to how abrupt death can be, and how short life is.