Wow this poem is increadable. the way it started off was really good, it was a very poetic way of saying this person has turned 16 which i really liked and i probably would not have been able to come up with :P ill be honest with u here, i am a catholic but the problem is i dont have any other choice really and, well, i dont believe in god. the poem is completly beautiful all the way through but to me seeing the name god in a poem usually just throws me off and makes me stop reading and say holy this is lame..but sumhow u managed to make me look at it, continue reading and be completly awed by what u had to say. the last finishing lines really sumed up the poem greatly and is a very bold statement. well before i continue rambling on lol, just wanna say great job-keep it up..id like to see some more poems on this site by you! keep it up!:)

Thats a really good poem well writen god bless