Girl iloved it very much for me it was like a short poem full of simple words and this words are very effective and you are right in every thing you said i agree with you there is no doubt at all
and plus you full with deep passion and emotion and for me its the most important thing when you try to write something and that also what makes me feel that you write a poem and i wish that every thing become in your life as the way you want to:)) :))